1) What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing?
The comments others have posred on my blog is very good things in my writing. They told me about my mistake words and insufficient explanation in my paragraph, so I could find out my mistake and insufficiency. Also, we could share various ideas about writing topic. We have shared each other's opinions with respect. Therefore, we could talk freely about any topic. I would be intrigued to here others' views about various topic now and for ever :)
2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing?
I mostly empathize with their posting and advice a proper contents according to Gary's lights. From that, I have been able to learn many things. Whenever I read other's writing, I tried to think more deeply into good grammar. Therefore, I could learn a correct grammar and a skill regarding a good writing. In short, writing comments on other blogs helps me to write a better writing.
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A Travel with a Companion
Do you like to travel? I like to
travel. Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to
travel alone. My case falls under the former. I prefer to travel with my family
and my best friend. Traveling with a companion is a lot of fun. In addition, traveling
with a companion has a lot of merit for three reasons.
First, traveling with a companion is cheaper than traveling alone. When planning a travel, you must reckon in the accommodation. If you are traveling alone, you have to pay for the room alone. On the other hand, if you are traveling with a companion, you can share to pay for the room with them. Also, most people have a desire to eat many different foods. It will be expensive to buy many different foods. However, if you are traveling with a companion, you can share many different foods with them for a nominal amount of money.
Second, traveling with a companion is safer than traveling alone. A lot of things happen during a trip. Therefore, it is very important to stay in touch with someone when you are in a strange place. If a serious matter happen to me, my companion will know my problem and help me.
First, traveling with a companion is cheaper than traveling alone. When planning a travel, you must reckon in the accommodation. If you are traveling alone, you have to pay for the room alone. On the other hand, if you are traveling with a companion, you can share to pay for the room with them. Also, most people have a desire to eat many different foods. It will be expensive to buy many different foods. However, if you are traveling with a companion, you can share many different foods with them for a nominal amount of money.
Second, traveling with a companion is safer than traveling alone. A lot of things happen during a trip. Therefore, it is very important to stay in touch with someone when you are in a strange place. If a serious matter happen to me, my companion will know my problem and help me.
Finally, it can share memories with
other people. Shared memories let us hear, smell, taste, and feel again. You
can open ‘the memory box’ with a companion at any time. It is pleasant for us
to reminisce about good memories.
In short, traveling with a companion is cheaper and safer than traveling alone. Plus, it can share many memories with other people.
In short, traveling with a companion is cheaper and safer than traveling alone. Plus, it can share many memories with other people.
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