2015년 10월 31일 토요일

Blog Post #2

1) What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing?
 The comments others have posred on my blog is very good things in my writing. They told me about my mistake words and insufficient explanation in my paragraph, so I could find out my mistake and insufficiency. Also, we could share various ideas about writing topic. We have shared each other's opinions with respect. Therefore, we could talk freely about any topic. I would be intrigued to here others' views about various topic now and for ever :)

2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing?
 I mostly empathize with their posting and advice a proper contents according  to Gary's lights. From that, I have been able to learn many things. Whenever I read other's writing, I tried to think more deeply into good grammar. Therefore, I could learn a correct grammar and a skill regarding a good writing. In short, writing comments on other blogs helps me to write a better writing.

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  1. Hi Jinmyung,

    First of all, thank you for your comment on my blog. :) I also agree that we really learn a lot from each other's posting. Especially when we were given a same topic to write about, I can read about something that I haven't thought of. Additionally I like the part where you mostly empathize with other's posting. It seems like you are very open-minded to learn something more. I hope I can learn your generosity related to education. :)

    Have a great day,
    HoJung

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  2. Hi Jinmyung,

    I almost agree with your post. Many students find out my mistake too. I also fixed it correctly,and I am very thankful of finding out my mistake. I find out your mistake in this post. I think you wanted to write 'posted' ,but you wrote 'posred' in first line. You have to change your mistake ,if you want good grade!

    Have a nice day,
    Youngjae

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  3. Dear Jinmyung,

    I agree with your opinion. I also think that the comments others have posted on my blog taught me mistake words and insufficient explanation. Today, you could find out mistaken word like ‘posted’. : ) The more carefully you write, the fewer mistakes you will make.

    Thanks,
    Eunju

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