First, traveling with a companion is cheaper than traveling alone. When planning a travel, you must reckon in the accommodation. If you are traveling alone, you have to pay for the room alone. On the other hand, if you are traveling with a companion, you can share to pay for the room with them. Also, most people have a desire to eat many different foods. It will be expensive to buy many different foods. However, if you are traveling with a companion, you can share many different foods with them for a nominal amount of money.
Second, traveling with a companion is safer than traveling alone. A lot of things happen during a trip. Therefore, it is very important to stay in touch with someone when you are in a strange place. If a serious matter happen to me, my companion will know my problem and help me.
Finally, it can share memories with
other people. Shared memories let us hear, smell, taste, and feel again. You
can open ‘the memory box’ with a companion at any time. It is pleasant for us
to reminisce about good memories.
In short, traveling with a companion is cheaper and safer than traveling alone. Plus, it can share many memories with other people.
In short, traveling with a companion is cheaper and safer than traveling alone. Plus, it can share many memories with other people.
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Hello Jin myuong
답글삭제I agree of your thought. Where is the destination is not a important thing but who is going to go with you. It can be your family, firends. Sometimes, however, I often go to travel with a music. It is very interest thing. Music can change the mood of your destination. Also, in your paragraph, If you add a 'for three reasons' after the sentence "traveling with a companion has a lot of merit.", It will be more complete topic sentence.
Thanks,
Lee Dong hyuk
Dear Jin-Myong,
답글삭제First, I really like how you put it, "memory box". That is such a sweet description for that. I can see your point clearly, but I found that your point is a little bit over- repetitive cross the paragraph. I hoped you explained a little bit of more details below the topic such as what is the a lot of things happened and in the final point, what is "it" -- hope it was clear enough for me to understand right away! But I like reading your post as well as the photo.
Best,
Sinae
Dear Jinmyong,
답글삭제Although I prefer to travel along, travel with compaion is nice way to travel. In my case, If I go to travel with my compaion, I can't concentrate about my destination.
But it is true that tarvel along is sometime boring and not safe as your mention.
You worte about the merit of 'travel with a compaion' very cleary. But if you worte the topic simply, it is better paragraph I think.
Thanks,
Kyung Jun.
Hi Jinmyong,
답글삭제I agree your writing, but I want to write advantages to travel along. One meirt is you can travel when you want to go. You don't need to schedule with your companions. The other merit is you can do as you like. You don't need to mind your companion's feelings.
Thanks,
Junsu