Did you attend university? These days, more people go to university than in the past according to data relesed by Statisitics Korea. They start working later, and with more qualifications. Is this a good thing or bad thing? I think this is a good thing. University is a way to learn more about what I am interested in. University is the nurseries of promising talent. In addition, university has a lot of merit.
First, we can learn various things in university. University teach various liberal arts as well as a major. University has a very broad range of cultural subjects we can study. We can choice and learn more about what I am interested in. Students learn the accountability of choice. We also learn how to solve problems and work together through team project.
Second, when we are an undergraduate is an opportune time to try us chance at something new. Undergraduate has many advantages such as student discount, scholarship, and so on. Therefore, students cost comparatively few money at trying something new. Also, university students have a lot of free time. University students can enjoy long summer vacations and winter vacations. University students have time to try something with less money. It is very good chance.
Finally, we can also make connections with various people in university. The old saying goes that it's not what you know, it's who you know. Strong connections with a variety of people will become your biggest asset in the near future.
University is one step backward in order to take two steps forward. Going to a university is investing in our future. I think it is good that more people go to university than in the past and it is not a big problem.
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Hello,
답글삭제Jinmyung
I agree with your opinion. I absolutely agree with your final opinion. I agree that I has learned many things at the university, and I has learned human relationship. I make girlfriend and were also contentious with freinds. It has been facilitated relationships between peole. I was impressed by your last comment.
Have a nice day,
Hyuncheol
Hello Jinmyung,
답글삭제Your paragraph is easy to understand. I agree your opinion that the university is taking one step backward in order to take two steps forward, but I think your writing needs evidences. If you add outside sources about benefits of university such as examples of students who receive a scholarship, your paragraph becomes more interesting and credible.
Have a nice day,
Sojin
Hi Jinmyung,
답글삭제I read your post interestingly. I agree with your opinion. University is good place for our education. Also, there are many advantages when we go to there. However, university doesn't guarantee our life advance, I think. There are many people who wastes there time in university. Therefore, we need will to advance for our life when we go to university. Thank you for reading my comment.
Have a nice day,
Youngwoon.
Hi Jinmyung,
답글삭제I read your post interestingly. I agree with your opinion. University is good place for our education. Also, there are many advantages when we go to there. However, university doesn't guarantee our life advance, I think. There are many people who wastes there time in university. Therefore, we need will to advance for our life when we go to university. Thank you for reading my comment.
Have a nice day,
Youngwoon.
Hi Jinmyung,
답글삭제I enjoyed reading your opinion writing. I totally agree with your opinion. I also think that going to the university is better than having jobs immediately after graduate high school. Especially, when I have been taking many classes in Sejong University, I think I need to learn more things so far because I'm still not smart. In addition, I feel enjoying when I learned that I liked or interested in. However, let's think about my problem. A few days ago, I applied joint honours that name is 'College of Hospitality and Tourism' because I want to be a ground staff of airports. Before the interview, I needed to write my academic plan when I enter the department. This is the problem. When I wrote my plan, I had no choice but to write only with or for my job. In my writing, I regard studying in the university as only the tool which is needed for seeking jobs. I think it is really bad because the part of learning is decreasing gradually. How about this? I want to know your opinion of this problem. I hope to read your another writing next time.
Thanks,
Jihyeon
Hello Jinmyung,
답글삭제It was really clear to see what you are trying to say in this post. I don't think university is bad like you said above but if I can add some of my thoughts on the university discussion, I do not think it is necessary for everyone to go to university. I wonder you have thought with this issue. Just one thing is I found some errors in the paragraph which I think is common when you edit it. I am sure you will spot them when you write a final draft. I hope you have a good day.
Best,
Sinae